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*Chocolate.....
Sweet and packed with sugar- bringing a temporary joy and happiness- Comfort food, a bar of small square,brown,dark,*white*lies....When it's gone....so are you.
Chips....Salty like the tears you've cried, that I've cried- we've cried. Rigid and misshaped like reality- unlike the perfect lies you've been told- that you've been telling yourself- wake up and smell the vomit I'm throwing up thinking about this....
writing this....
Cookies....alluring....delicious....
Which do you prefer- Soft or Crunchy? Soft leaves less mess and lasts longer, but it still disappears....Crunchy leaves pieces everywhere and crumbles easily, leaving you with nothing- Soft is fun to eat and chew, Crunchy breaks, you barley get a taste- Satisfied yet?!
You act all sweet making me happy, comfort me through the hard times- fill my head with white lies, make me taste the salt of tears, makes me vomit just thinking about this....Lure me in with the delicious mess you left me- I wish this could of lasted longer but now I'm leaving *you* with nothing- leaving you in pieces- unlike you I don't crumble so easily. Your Soft side was fun to have - but your Crunchy side, I barely got a taste- I was unsatisfied, but I'll be satisfied after I'm gone....after your gone. I've had my fill of lies,tears,and you- I'm still unsatisfied- But I'm Satisfied- So,Satisfied yet?....*
Sweet and packed with sugar- bringing a temporary joy and happiness- Comfort food, a bar of small square,brown,dark,*white*lies....When it's gone....so are you.
Chips....Salty like the tears you've cried, that I've cried- we've cried. Rigid and misshaped like reality- unlike the perfect lies you've been told- that you've been telling yourself- wake up and smell the vomit I'm throwing up thinking about this....
writing this....
Cookies....alluring....delicious....
Which do you prefer- Soft or Crunchy? Soft leaves less mess and lasts longer, but it still disappears....Crunchy leaves pieces everywhere and crumbles easily, leaving you with nothing- Soft is fun to eat and chew, Crunchy breaks, you barley get a taste- Satisfied yet?!
You act all sweet making me happy, comfort me through the hard times- fill my head with white lies, make me taste the salt of tears, makes me vomit just thinking about this....Lure me in with the delicious mess you left me- I wish this could of lasted longer but now I'm leaving *you* with nothing- leaving you in pieces- unlike you I don't crumble so easily. Your Soft side was fun to have - but your Crunchy side, I barely got a taste- I was unsatisfied, but I'll be satisfied after I'm gone....after your gone. I've had my fill of lies,tears,and you- I'm still unsatisfied- But I'm Satisfied- So,Satisfied yet?....*
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a sucky poem 4 a sucky week.....i'm not really satified w/ this piece. it doesn't make much sense, it's random,a bit disterbing,and i wanna puke cause it's bad. DX
but enjoy it anyway. my amatuer poem which,in my notebook, was a page. all the feelings in the poem that's how i feel about the poem, but i don't really care even if it did take me a few days to figure it out. this is as good as it's gonna get so...... :/
P.S. the full title of this is "The Satisfaction of Chocolate,Chips,and Cookie Crumbs" it was 2 long so i had 2 shorten it. it's also part of this little series 4 my LoveSick poems called "The Lost Verses". hope someone reads them & COMMENTS. i'd love 2 hear how 2 improve.
but enjoy it anyway. my amatuer poem which,in my notebook, was a page. all the feelings in the poem that's how i feel about the poem, but i don't really care even if it did take me a few days to figure it out. this is as good as it's gonna get so...... :/
P.S. the full title of this is "The Satisfaction of Chocolate,Chips,and Cookie Crumbs" it was 2 long so i had 2 shorten it. it's also part of this little series 4 my LoveSick poems called "The Lost Verses". hope someone reads them & COMMENTS. i'd love 2 hear how 2 improve.
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